Check the rhythm of the funk I wrote:
Bears fan, but got more in common with the ‘Niners,
Lookin for that treasure; I heard seekers are the finders.
Let the Word remind us the full version’s better than shareware,
Once I copped it, my heart burst forth like I was a Care Bear.
(from the forthcoming release The Sound and the Fury by Oneway distributed by Sleeper by the Dozen Records available at T.J. Maxx)
2 comments:
That Care bear line took courage, man. Keep working on that rapid, rhymin' funk jones.
Thanks for noticing the audacity. I almost took this post down after rereading it; I think I could make the Care Bear line work in person, but in type it looks pretty dang stupid.
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